Thank you for your video! I learned a lot about presentation from it. Your diction and tone while speaking was excellent and kept the viewer listening. Additionally, having statistics rather than a long anecdote was great especially for what you are pitching for. The only thing I would suggest in the future is increased eye contact with the camera and shortening the pitch by about 10-20 seconds as to keep the listener engaged and present the information quickly for their decision.
Your elevator pitch was exquisite the confidence you spoke in your pitch brings in much guidance that you know what you are doing and in that way the investors will be willing to work with you. The data you presented i think gives a great touch to your pitch because it lets the viewers know that you know the outcomes of your work as well as the effects it will have all together. All in all, i really enjoyed your elevator pitch and think it is a great model to how i should approach mine next time.
Hello Mr. Bevilacqua,
ReplyDeleteThank you for your video! I learned a lot about presentation from it. Your diction and tone while speaking was excellent and kept the viewer listening. Additionally, having statistics rather than a long anecdote was great especially for what you are pitching for. The only thing I would suggest in the future is increased eye contact with the camera and shortening the pitch by about 10-20 seconds as to keep the listener engaged and present the information quickly for their decision.
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ReplyDeleteYour elevator pitch was exquisite the confidence you spoke in your pitch brings in much guidance that you know what you are doing and in that way the investors will be willing to work with you. The data you presented i think gives a great touch to your pitch because it lets the viewers know that you know the outcomes of your work as well as the effects it will have all together. All in all, i really enjoyed your elevator pitch and think it is a great model to how i should approach mine next time.